tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9961185.post110831976825456499..comments2020-02-10T04:03:08.901-08:00Comments on PodPoet: POEM: Little FlyPodPoethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16741768952549044559noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9961185.post-1108322862210832042005-02-13T11:27:00.000-08:002005-02-13T11:27:00.000-08:00Verdict: Beautiful
Simple yet undoubtedly effecti...Verdict: Beautiful <br />Simple yet undoubtedly effective in conveying the message of good, humanity, and peace on earth. It's always hard for me to write simple, two-line stanzas but you do it very well. The story is neatly told, and appreciatively, without the use of bombastic, obscure words to confuse the readers.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9961185.post-1108321892422343252005-02-13T11:11:00.000-08:002005-02-13T11:11:00.000-08:00it's nice as a children's poem, though i think the...it's nice as a children's poem, though i think the idea of war is lost to many of them: they understand fear, loss and pain ... but the players in the war? i'm not so sure.<br /><br />but the idea behind this is awesome ... a fly, a female fly, bringing piece to the earth with a touch of her feet -- that the bearer of pestilence and disease can bring peace. i like that a lot ....Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com