Tuesday, March 01, 2005

POEM: For Fernando

Fire Burning inside me
Sadness turns to happy

Two arms holding mine
Discord now is rhyme

Rainbow spreading above
...as loneliness becomes love


ka said...

emo, nothing fresh or uniquely you.

sweetpain said...

the title reminded me of an abba song lol. i like the last line. but im kind of not sure about the rest, it seems like your trying really hard to be poetic but just not getting there. overall, needs some work.